The Beach
1. Food
2. Swimming
3. Bridge
On Sunday the 14.10.18 we all arrived at the beach in Waitangi, I excitedly hoped out of the car and ran down to the sand. It was so warm and the water was so cold. I moved all the food to the chair by the beach. I was so hungry my stomach was rumbling, Once I finished I quickly ran down to the beach and jumped in.
Once I had jumped in I was cold as, I got used to it. All my cousins had came and jumped in. We all played a game. I started to get cold so I just lied on the ground. I got hot again so I expeditiously ran to the water, It started to get warm after a while.
As all my little cousins got out we all breathlessly ran down to the bridge and instantly hopped on the bridge and jumped off, We all did a chain. It was so fun because I had most of my cousins there. The day had finished and I was extremely tired.
THE END
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